帮忙改下英语短剧的语法错误 谢^^

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/05 13:55:39
我们外教留的作业,说是一天我和我的朋友去动物园要回家时动物园闭园了……帮忙改下语法错误,应该会有很多……谢了
A:It’s getting late.we have to back home now.
B:I really want to do so.But…uhm…If you can see the gate is closed?
A:You mean we can not go out of there now?
B:Yes.
A:You mean we should stay at this zoo all night long?
B:Yeah.
A:You mean…
B:Oh,yes,yes.you are right.
A:That’s…That’s…you know,that’s very cool!
B:I don’t think so.I think we’ll have hard time tonight.
WOLF:Hello everyone!Welcome to BongBong Zoo.My name is Bongbong.You can just call me Bong.Although I’m a wolf,I’m very kind and gentle.
How do you do,madam?You are so beautiful.Can you dance with me?
A:Oh,my god!He is a wolf.He can speak English fluently!Can you teach me English?
WOLF:That’s OK,madam.But you should allow me to eat you.
A:No way!You are an unpolite wolf!And you have got a bad name too.
(WALK)
CAT:Meow^^meow.
B:Can you use human language?
CAT:Nod.
B:Can y

1.B:I don’t think so.I think we’ll have hard time tonight.
改为have a hard time tonight.
2.B:Good job.Let’s speak in Chinese.
Good job不妥,改为All right.
3.B:I think I heard somebody was saying something.
去掉was 注意句型:hear sb do sth.
4.MONKEY:Here are you.
你写倒了,应该是Here you are.
5.BEAR:Easy.Follow me.
应该在Easy前面加That's 改为That's easy才通顺.
6.BEAR:Climb along the tree branch,then we can get out from there.
应该是get out of there.
7.BEAR:uh-ha,I locked the gate at all.It’ me.! The end.
这句话不太对劲.
改成强调句: It's me who has locked the gate!

A we have to GO back home.
B can't you see the gate is closed?
..病句好多....
I think we will have A hard time tonight.
不能说UNPOLITE 是 IMPOLITE
'here you are' not 'here are you'
这篇文章读上去怪怪的 不大对劲 都...

1 A:It's getting late.we have to (go) back home now.

2 You mean we can not go out of (here) now?

3 B:I